Natisha Inklebarger
Wednesday, August 3, 2011
LOOK :P What do you think of my response Poem? Offer any feedback.?
I think it comes off as forced, as you have bottled yourself in, as you try to rhyme those long ee words, to the point that the power of the poem is sapped by your whimsy
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